tanka (5-7-5-7-7 format)
bit of a breeze
through standing puddles
trying hard
to put my thoughts
in 5-7-5-7-7 format
monotanka (visiting a bathhouse)
not visiting a bathhouse, reading zuihitsu on my day off...another expresso tastes slightly off
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