senryu cluster

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 dog's tired face i stand in a strong north wind

anxious :: fresh beer carries some kind of relief

woman in red high heels, letters in old shoe box

'renso' association of images :: juxtaposition in English

Kyoshi the hardass :: thumbing my nose at convention 

* Takahama Kyoshi: the defacto ruler of Hototogisu Haiku group and the haiku community at large. One of Shiki's disciples. 

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